Suppose (假设) you want to be a computer programmer. Tell us how to make your resolution work.

Suppose (假设) you want to be a computer programmer. Tell us how to make your resolution work.

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【答案】

I am going to be a computer engineer when I grow up, because I’m very interested in computers. I’m going to study math and computer science hard. In my free time, I’m going to get a part-time job, so that I can save some money. I want to buy a new computer with the money to practice every day. And I’m going to work in Shanghai, since it’s a modern city, and I like it very much.

【解析】

本题写作提示的内容不多，只是假设你想成为一名电脑程序员，如何做才能实现自己的理想。通过提示内容可知，文章要围绕怎样才能成为一名电脑程序员去组织材料，可以自由发挥，写前最好要列出写作提纲，时态主要用一般将来时，人称为第一人称。

写作亮点：短文能充分使用be going to结构表示计划、打算、将要做的事情。文章简洁明了，说理清楚；时态运用正确，特别是主、从句的时态的变化把握得很好；词语（短语）运用准确得当。①be going to be 想成为……。②主句用将来时，则从句用一般现在时。③词组get a part-time job得到一份兼职工作。④介词with表示“用，使用”。